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Sarah Gilchrist
2 min readMar 16, 2021

BOE Meeting

who: Assistant superintendent Max Hoemmeldorfer

what: Decrease in enrollment dropped by 200 students.

when: Thursday night

where: At School Board of Education meeting

why: N/A

how: N/A

On Thursday night, the Hattiesburg Board of Education met. Assistant superintendent Max Hoemmeldorfer reported a decrease in enrollment dropped by 200 students.

The Board met on Thursday and accepted report and passed a rule that prohibit female students from wearing blue jeans.

“This is the third year we’ve lost enrollment, the future looks bleak”, Assistant superintendent Max Hoemmeldorfer said.

Faculty in Plane Crash

who: John Dumont and George Johnson

what: Deadly plane crash

when: Thursday night

where: Kennedy International Airport

why: N/A

how: N/A

A deadly plane crash happened Thursday night. Five people were killed and two escaped injury.

Two associate professor’s from Backwater State University were returning from a work conference when there was a deadly plane crash. They survived the crash but five people were killed and two escaped injury.

Meeman Speaks

who: Norman Meeman

what: Winner of Pultizer Prize

when: Sunday at 4:30 p.m.

where: William Oxley Thomson Memorial Library

how: won the Pulitzer Prize two years ago for his book, My Life as Far as It Goes

Pulitzer Prize winner, Normal Meeman spoke on Sunday.

He spoke at the Library on Sunday. His audience were mostly English students. “These parodies they assign in college English courses are a bunch of hogwash.”

Professor wins Award

who: Clement Crabtree

what: George Washington Honor Medal winner

when: Last week

where: Pennsylvania

how: He was cited for his essay called “Plan for Peach”

A professor won the George Washington Honor Medal winner in Pennsylvania last week.

There was a ceremony last week in Pennsylvania. A professor of horticulture was cited for his essay “Plan for Peace”. Thirty two others won the George Washington Honor Medal winner.

He spoke to students on Sunday and told them, “You can’t be a great writer by intimating the styles of prize-winning authors. You’ve got to get out and sample life, learn how other people live, and then let your inner feelings pour out. These parodies they assign in college English courses are a bunch of hogwash.”

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